Jerry T Curtis Poet Rhyme

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Please read what I wrote and add the next stanza
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Please write in the first person  ie:I


My Advice 

I read a poem, yesterday
About just made me cry
This person wrote
They frighted one day they'd die
I said hey buddy, 
You know, you only have to close your eyes
And when you open them again
You're gonna get a big surprise

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Cona Adams January 5, 2015 at 7:51 AM You might be in Paradise You might be down below Or stuck on a shelf somewhere between. The only way you're gonna know, You simply have to close your eyes. Some people truly hate them, But I love a big surprise!

Andrea Dietrich December 24, 2014 at 12:34 PM Jerry, If I were not rushing to get off here, this would be fun!! I just came to tell you that I am enjoying the entries to your contest. You sure picked a great theme. and have a merry christmas. Jerry T Curtis December 25, 2014 at 6:09 AM Thanks Andrea--Merry Christmas

Richard Lamoureux December 24, 2014 at 9:13 AM Merry Christmas Jerry. Jerry T Curtis December 25, 2014 at 6:08 AM Merry Christmas Richard

Richard Lamoureux December 24, 2014 at 9:10 AM Dead ain't dead it was just a goodbye. For when your eyes open you will be on high. No more sinking feeling, you'll be able to fly. All your questions answered, death is but an elaborate lie. Jerry T Curtis December 25, 2014 at 6:10 AM and sometimes life seems like a joke