Try and Surf the Universe

surf the universe let the wave carry your soul forget time, calendar, your phone, dollars , 
even death don’t let the material  things on earth be your final fantasy
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Bruce Avatar
May 4, 2009 at 2:06 PM
Thanks I i just started writing poems so i would like honest feedback on them.. It would help me
Moreno Avatar
May 4, 2009 at 3:06 AM
Nice work and welcome to poetry soup...Raul
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