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Truth Wont Lie

Truth Won't Lie To what avail are scriptures etched on stones ~ If it’s true, we must feel it in our bones” (by Unseeking Seeker) Truth won’t lie when the conscience call Voice drills from skin to bone Hear the solemn hymn of His soul From its smoothest to sweetest tone Face bravely for God’s fair Who forgives lies in flare We know His love and care Chin up high Truth won’t lie May 7, 2022 11.22 pm Quietus Created by” Unseeking Seeker,” consisting of one quatrain (syllable count 8-6-8-6 with a rhyme of abab ), one tercet (syllable count 6-6-6 with a rhyme scheme of ccc ), and one refrain with a rhyme scheme of (dd), made from a line of words from line one, how many words is your choice. The refrain is the title. Our Truth Contest Judged: 5/7/2022 12:34:00 AM Sponsored by: Unseeking Seeker Place: 10 (10w)

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 5/7/2022 10:20:00 AM

Amazing depth of wisdom to be pondered - "truth won't lie!" Nice going Len! What a courageous and evocative theme for this contest. We can always count on truth and trust in truth's veracity without a doubt darkening our belief. Really nice writing. Congratulations!!! Blessings! Thank you for that wisdom.

Len Gasun
Date: 5/7/2022 7:04:00 PM

I strongly agree my dear friend, Sam. Thank you so much for dropping by and your kind words. God bless you. Hugs

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 5/7/2022 4:57:00 AM

Wonderful message for humanity, "Truth won't lie" wraps your poem up perfectly. Good luck in the contest. :)Paulette

Len Gasun
Date: 5/7/2022 7:03:00 PM

Thank you so much dear friend Paulette for dropping by to read my poem and your kind words. God bless you. Hugs

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 5/7/2022 1:00:00 AM

If only we need voice of God as our conscience! Thanks for bringing this to our attention, Len. Congrats on your win

Len Gasun
Date: 5/7/2022 7:01:00 PM

Our conscience actually is the voice of God who speaks and intervenes my dear friend US. Thank you so much for acknowledging my poem in your contest. Actually I was thinking before to use His soul instead of our soul. I I wanna put it back. Again, thank you so much. God bless you, Hugs.