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Truth In Thoughts

Rationalizing cost humanity Paradise with burden to choose right the price an ego to be awaken to rise when the herd falls asleep to vice Snake pride tends to hide selfishness in a tomb inside righteous façade outside to camouflage grudges' bite Passing blame for robbery of joy burning culprit in thoughts like toy scattering ashes' sparks to destroy compassion that love may deploy As part of humanity body a sneeze in Wuhan is felt in Bari a boomerang that travels to return multiplied to quench or to burn Only God reads thoughts judges right His lovelight perfection shines bright through any window open to His light sprouting charity everywhere in sight First Place Winner: A Brian Strand Rhymed Contest-8/2/21 Honorable Mention: Carolyn Devonshire-Unity-1/22/21

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Date: 8/2/2021 7:12:00 PM
selfishness in a tomb inside with a righteous façade outside to camouflage grudges' bite Beautiful Creation. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 5/5/2021 10:20:00 AM
Beautiful Poem!
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Date: 1/23/2021 8:46:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Frances!
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Date: 1/23/2021 12:09:00 PM
- Congratulations on your h/m on the winner list, Frances :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/22/2021 5:13:00 AM
Your poem would have placed higher if it had been between 4 and 14 lines as in the contest rules. It's a shame because you have some very good lines. Congrats on your honorable mention. Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 1/20/2021 1:37:00 PM
Like the thought, is expressed well and in rhyme. Yes, IF uniting, instead of pulling apart. Paradise would over flow. (Peace, Love and Joy would prevail).
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