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Truth

your lies actually tell me truth your beginnings are your roots the things you start, will be ended by others i love you, like i love my brother the things you do now are what you mess up i wish you'd understand enough is enough you dolt realize you're hurting yourself everything inside you:your sense, emotions and health the things you do aren't helping you even your "friends" will look back on you as a fool the way you're living isn't very smart but no matter what, you'll always have my faith and heart its hard to hear and believe the truth but rim only telling you this cause rim trying to help you you cant solve everything with talk and fists i make myself a hypricrit, telling you all this

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 9/29/2008 6:41:00 AM
problems, man problems. greatly communicated. each line very provoking. great work . John H. Loving III
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