Trustful

Trustful
True reliance
Open invitation
Confidence poured into vessels
Loyal

~*~

For:  Catie's "Traditional Cinquain" Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
April 21, 2011 at 2:37 PM
HI, Annalise, I like this thought. the fourth line was a great summary. soupmail.
Neels Avatar
April 17, 2011 at 11:27 AM
This is so true Annalise, enjoyed your cinquain tonight.. Had a busy weekend, luckily we are only working 4 days this week, hope your week will be a brilliant one.. Love, Wilma
Babcock Avatar
April 16, 2011 at 8:18 AM
That is so true that trust and loyalty go hand in hand. Thank you for your comments. Have a wonderful weekend. Phyl
Sweetheart Avatar
April 15, 2011 at 5:49 AM
Wonderful words to express the truth of the matter ..trust and loyalty go hand in hand Annalise .. good luck in the contest my friend.. and happy weekend too..
Dietrich Avatar
April 15, 2011 at 12:36 AM
HI, Annalise, lots of good descriptive words for trust and loyalty, my friend!
Devonshire Avatar
April 14, 2011 at 3:51 PM
Your cinquain is awesome, Annalise. Once we lose trust in someone, it is hard to regain it. Loyalty does not seem to be as genuine as it once was. (We learn this the hard way.) Winning wishes for Catie's contest! Love, Carolyn
Mehta Avatar
April 14, 2011 at 12:46 PM
Lovely expression on trust, Annalise. But please give once over to the first line "trust", it's single syllable
Onclaud Avatar
April 14, 2011 at 12:23 PM
ohh anna, one of the virtues or values i so respect.. written so flawlessly from your golden quill! best winning piece, dear one! :) huggs, nette
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