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My poem "Trust" turned into a lyric and then set to Music. 

Its amazing how much you can convey as you take a piece along each step of the way. Adding to the meaning, coloring in around the edges. 

Trust is the bedrock of all good relationships. 

 

[Instrumental] Some think it's given up front, some think it's earned. Some think it's something innate, some think it learned. Though trust is not a physical thing it can be broken, shattered, smashed. And with each blow the trust left is not like cash. Its more like water, it drips and drizzles and oozes all away..... Its meant to be in a calm still pool not agitated in any way..... Though the pool can settle to a blow the container might gain a crack. And its ourselves you see that need the fixing, to hold the trust pool back. With trust in yourself, and trust in others, the world is a friendly place. With lack of trust into a bleak world we are thrust and our future is in decay.... (and its scary too) So build the bonds of trust with me, and as I will with you... To be there for each other, no matter what may come is the best in this world we can do. And if you can make this leap with me a relationship is possible you see. (Because ultimately trust is a two way street) Though trust is not a physical thing it can be broken, shattered, smashed.. And with each blow the trust left is not like cash... [Outro] Its more like water, it drips and drizzles and oozes all away... Its meant to be in a calm still pool not agitated in any way... Though the pool can settle to a blow the container might gain a crack. And its ourselves you see that need the fixing, to hold the trust pool back. So heal with me. So you and I can be. Meet me in the middle and lets see what this can be... Give us a try. Take a leap of faith. Build that bridge each day, with a step each and every day! With me you are safe. With me you are safe. With me you are safe....

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Date: 8/13/2024 5:41:00 AM
Dear Susan, I loved reading your song and listening to the musical words. I also loved how you built this song and delivered it. I even closed my eyes to see the images in my mind. What a wonderful song and sound. - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Susan Manley
Date: 8/15/2024 10:41:00 AM
Just wait till you see my latest :D
Date: 8/12/2024 3:29:00 PM
Hello Susan Manley, It is nice to meet you. Yes i agree trust is a two way street. A trust broken is shattered smashed. When the trust is broken it is hard to fix. Hard to trust that person when that person broke the trust. Enjoy your evening. my friend. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/13/2024 10:12:00 AM
Hello Susan, Yes I did. A beautiful song Susan. Enjoy your day my friend. Hugs. /Darlene/
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Susan Manley
Date: 8/12/2024 4:40:00 PM
Hey Darlene, thanks for stopping by and commenting. Did you get a chance to listen to the song too? I uploaded a copy of it as well. - Susan

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