Trust

I am a wonderful rainbow color,
Bright as can be 
Thee trust may be unbearable 
Once you lose it
It will become invisible.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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May 9, 2014 at 6:48 AM
I Love Your Little Poetic Rainbow, Beautiful Desiray! True, Once We Lose Certain Things They Become Hard For Us To Attain Again, Amid All Their Beauty ? Yet, When One Lives In 'Hope,' All Things Become Possible: Through, 'OUR HEAVENLY LOVING FATHER!' Congratulations, Upon Your Wonderful Feature...Love, Jeremy *
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May 6, 2014 at 6:35 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Desiray
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May 14, 2014 at 8:20 PM
Thank you so much it means a lot to me (:
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April 22, 2014 at 1:29 PM
Desiray, , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your poetry. At this very moment, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your writings. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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April 22, 2014 at 3:16 PM
Wow thank you for the welcoming (:
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April 18, 2014 at 12:04 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Desiray :) - I choose your first good written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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April 18, 2014 at 12:10 PM
Thank you for the welcoming , and poetry soup has been the best site for me so far! I am very happy with your review (:
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April 18, 2014 at 8:42 AM
Hi Desiray, WOW, this is deep, we all need to stay focus and not slip, and lose the trust we have. A good poem.. , WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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April 18, 2014 at 12:03 PM
Thank you so much. I may join the contest (:
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