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Trust

I am a wonderful rainbow color, Bright as can be Thee trust may be unbearable Once you lose it It will become invisible.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/9/2014 6:48:00 AM
I Love Your Little Poetic Rainbow, Beautiful Desiray! True, Once We Lose Certain Things They Become Hard For Us To Attain Again, Amid All Their Beauty ? Yet, When One Lives In 'Hope,' All Things Become Possible: Through, 'OUR HEAVENLY LOVING FATHER!' Congratulations, Upon Your Wonderful Feature...Love, Jeremy *
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Date: 5/6/2014 6:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Desiray
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desiray wells
Date: 5/14/2014 8:20:00 PM
Thank you so much it means a lot to me (:
Date: 4/22/2014 1:29:00 PM
Desiray, , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your poetry. At this very moment, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your writings. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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desiray wells
Date: 4/22/2014 3:16:00 PM
Wow thank you for the welcoming (:
Date: 4/18/2014 12:04:00 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Desiray :) - I choose your first good written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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desiray wells
Date: 4/18/2014 12:10:00 PM
Thank you for the welcoming , and poetry soup has been the best site for me so far! I am very happy with your review (:
Date: 4/18/2014 8:42:00 AM
Hi Desiray, WOW, this is deep, we all need to stay focus and not slip, and lose the trust we have. A good poem.. , WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 4/18/2014 12:03:00 PM
Thank you so much. I may join the contest (: