Trust

When will I learn what I know so well, this priceless thing You may have it from me kept strong and so closely that it's returned as we share it growing stronger each day as we keep and we hold it.Strange that it is, if either one sold it or broke it. Just once sad to say is enough that neither of one us would or could if I may hear words of pure truth no matter how true if the other had told it.No second chance just second guessing , every fond memory comes under question.The import of deeds now become past deceptions as the paths of our lives take a turn for the worse and what once was so simple a thing with no question .Second star from the left straight on all thats left is to mourn bad directions that led straight to this Hell.Sincerely I hope You have learned what it is I won't give You so long as I live Unless You have earned it , I have nothing to give.So TRUST in this as I TRUST it will serve You .I have TRUST in Your words in these ones alone .I didn't deserve You .TRUST me if only I'd known.       jAMES P Kail  thursday november 22 2012

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Date: 1/8/2013 2:16:00 PM
jamesp kail :-) your poem has been a wonderful write to find on the soups front page... '"Congratulations"" with your awesome featured poem of the week... always~ LINDA
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Date: 1/8/2013 10:04:00 PM
That is so cool Thanks Im honoured
Date: 12/9/2012 7:44:00 AM
A hard thing to gain and easy thing to lose. This fine write is in Narrative Form. Light & Love
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Date: 12/9/2012 5:40:00 PM
Thanks for the enlightenment.I haven't a clue what I'm doing :) I will change it right now
Date: 12/5/2012 6:24:00 PM
Turmoiled personified! Light & Love
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Date: 11/22/2012 1:34:00 PM
TRUST is key. I love your poem on this very subject. well written.
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Date: 11/22/2012 12:41:00 PM
A touching poem, I like it - well written. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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