Trust

Trust is the sole thing
which I aspired forever
but never did I gain it
from anyone so near

Always in my mind I did hope
to gain at least one's trust
but in every case
 I got the betrayal first 

One fine day I decided 
to count the umber of persons 
who had trust upon me
but to my amazement I found
hardly there was any that I could see.

I felt embarrassed as well as ashamed 
that so untrustworthy I was
that I couldn't be named 
for any good purpose or cause

My condition being worse than the worst
for I couldn't gain even my beloved one's trust
which I think surely is a must
to gain at least one's good trust

What's the use of my life
without anyone's trust
Oh God, Then please let me die
as I think I'm unfit 
to live in this world full of lie

Believe me the feeling of being betrayed 
is much worse than being un trusted
As the un trusted one can lead a solitary life
But  the betrayed ones are always haunted
and can't die even out of a knife.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 8/1/2011 9:28:00 AM
Trust is the base of any relation, that`s why it`s so important... But you are right, to be betrayed is the worst thing in the world
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Date: 9/13/2010 12:18:00 PM
Interesting thoughts that you have penned..It is bad to be untrustworthy or not be able to trust anyone ..It is also not good to be betrayed..But we can always remember that Jesus was betrayed..He is the greatest person/God to ever live. He was betrayed then and we betray him on a daily basis. He keeps on saying I forgive..Sara
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