Trust.

Who are you?

-I am a friend. 

Can I trust you?

-Till the end. 

I dont believe you; Your full of lies. 

-Shhh little child; watch your mouth, or you die. 


Dont believe everyone, on who they say they are.
Some people are liars, brilliantly mastered they are.

-Ill be like your brother.

I dont need another one. 

-Ill be like your best friend.

Something tells me to run.

-Lets talk. Whats your schools mascot name?

I cant tell you; my names no longer Rain.


Dont believe everyone; some people lie.
They say they dont mean to harm you; until you look them in the eye. 


-Can I be your mommy?

Well, mines not all that far away.

-Bet she wont love you like I will.

No, no thanks; thats okay.

-Well why not? I can do a better job.

Shes still my mother; she gave birth to me, you did not.


People will try anything; just ask my best friend.
When someone bad, tried to get her to foolishly trust him.

Dont trust everybody; Even I could be a lie.
Even on sites like this one; someone could be planning on how we'll die.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 5/28/2010 8:42:00 PM
This one is very enjoyable. Its a different style than I am used to.
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Date: 4/16/2010 9:42:00 AM
I am so pleased to have been able to read your poetry this morning Rain. Have a wonderful day. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/15/2010 2:29:00 PM
Trust is something that keeps you, I am one to keep away due to my trust isues...this is something I can relate to , take care:)
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Date: 4/15/2010 10:20:00 AM
Wow... excellent. And how right you are, unfortunately.
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Date: 4/15/2010 10:10:00 AM
A nice one Rain . I like your change on the tittle . Man and you are so right . You can not trust no one . But when I told you I am a friend I ment it. As a matter of fact you are the first person on this site. Who did not judge me. May I ask a favor from you. Go to billies slam on me Tell me what you think . Your opp. will mean much. P.D.
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