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Andaree
Created by Andrea Dietrich with a rhyming scheme AaBbCbcbbaA.  The first line and the last line are both the same 11- syllable line. This form decreases in line length with each line getting progressively smaller by 2 syllables until reaching the one-syllable word in the middle  of the poem. Then each of the lines increase progressively by 2 syllables until the final line of eleven syllables is met:  (11/9/7/5/3/1/3/5/7/9/11).  The middle word should be a word very important to the theme. It appears somewhere in the title or can be the title itself and that middle word also rhymes with lines 3 4  8 and 9. Centering the poem is also required for an hourglass effect!

there is only one prerequisite for love it fits snug as a hand in a glove beyond seduction of lust one truth is a must there need be trust it's the key when feelings combust it assures that love is just and helps you to fly free as a dove there is only one prerequisite for love (Andaree) Mar. 31, 2019

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Date: 4/10/2019 6:21:00 AM
Emile, between you and Andrea, poems of any form are always a pleasure to read. It is now wonder that you both are so highly ranked among Soupers.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/10/2019 7:21:00 AM
Thank you so much Curtis, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/31/2019 4:04:00 PM
Gorgeous Andaree; I think you write these more often than their inventor. You are exceedingly great at them, so I fully understand.
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Date: 3/31/2019 6:43:00 PM
Thanks Caren, it's always a pleasure to hear from you my friend, Emile.

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