Brian Strand Poet Verse

Trust

imperceptible
    and
      invisible
this fidelity,
delicate
and desirable,
impartial
      without
      blemish:
often
    so ethereal
..fleeting
yet
   enthralls
our notions
of
perfection,
so often
disappers
with a 
whimper

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Gershon Wolf November 12, 2018 at 8:31 AM Yes, so true...And when it disappears, our world is upended along with it... Nicely done! ~ Gershon Brian Strand November 12, 2018 at 2:32 PM Indeed Gershon ,as delicate as a flower

Anisha Dutta November 11, 2018 at 12:08 PM Yes.Trust disappears off n on. Brian Strand November 11, 2018 at 3:07 PM Depends .I think Anisha

Susan Ashley November 9, 2018 at 8:12 PM So beautiful in its expression and so true, Brian. Have a nice weekend. ~Susan Brian Strand November 10, 2018 at 2:57 AM Thanks Susan,best wishes with your creative endeavours

Heidi Sands November 9, 2018 at 6:55 AM This is a great one Brian :) Brian Strand November 9, 2018 at 7:33 AM You are too kind Heidi, thanks

Mystic Rose Rose November 9, 2018 at 5:29 AM Ah, I totally love this. Thank you Brian. Brian Strand November 9, 2018 at 5:35 AM Thanks Pixie