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True Valentine

True Valentine By Nate Spears Published 2013 in “Death OF A Rose” By Nate Spears A lost woman the mirror reflects Young; and it’s apparent I can see it in her eyes No focus and childbearing Just ass, legs, and thighs in mind No marriage If she knew better Learned better; and Wanted better, He would show her a better way of living Instead of dealing with cowards Seek a man with moral and merit He’s stealing your joy He’s bringing you pain Removing your youth He’s playing games The truth at heart is Reality should be your first thought Loneliness is not your fault It’s a part of life for most Don’t let it destroy your values Just wait, You’ll find a true love to treasure you.

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Date: 2/27/2013 4:41:00 AM
For some this is harder said than done. Most never see this behaviour growing up so there is no pattern to follow.
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Date: 2/27/2013 8:39:00 AM
The first paragraphs basically states in a creative way...a beautiful young woman who doesn't really know her value. The second paragraph states exactly what you comment explains, most never seen this growing up, so get taken advantage of when they become older, because they simply just don't know better. And the poems just ends with a little insight and inspiration. Thanks for you intellect! Beautiful and Smart <3

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