True To Yourself

they say not to loose faith
not to stop believeing
not to give up
but it is just so hard
not giveing up
trying to conain 
whatever hope that remains
left in my heart
inwhich continues to wither
to break to suffer
to die.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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April 13, 2009 at 7:12 AM
Dani, this is beautiful! (watch out for misspelling).
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April 4, 2009 at 2:56 PM
Dani you are not on your own God is with you every step of the way. All you have to do is speak to him just give him that little seed of hope you have left and see what he can do for you. Jesus loves and cares for you there is nothing to hard for him. God Bless. Leon
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