True Story, Bad Night Out

i was walking home alone one night, 
doing nothing wrong,
a group of guys came up to me,
trying to show their strong,
then they try to rob me,
and we got into a fight,
i did not really stand a chance,
it was an awfull night,
as they start to beat me,
and beat me to the floor,
i never really felt the pain,
and i knew i could take much more,
but as they keep on kicking me and jumping on my leg,
i knew i should of stayed at home, 
but i had gone out instead,
they broke my left knee cap, as they left me on the floor,
and they have made me feel like, i have never felt before,
so please be very carefull when your out alone at night,
as i dont want you to go through this serious trouble and strife
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Duncan Avatar
August 23, 2013 at 9:39 PM
I do hope you are ok now , and the only thing you have is a memory,,,, it's a very good write thought ;}
Lusha Avatar
April 29, 2010 at 5:37 AM
Hope your ok now...Allie
Palli Avatar
January 29, 2010 at 11:47 AM
Wow, sorry you had to go through that. Well written poem.
Harman Avatar
January 29, 2010 at 11:46 AM
hmm, been there when i was younger, is this a warning not to go out? to fear the night? I say it was worth it.
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