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True Motives

Moonbeams kiss on luscious curves of love To reach and Stretch from skies above Crystal snow flakes begin to dance On frigid winters breeze as if by chance Joining together before this winters eve Harmonizing making ones heart believe Twirling shinning bright as stars appear Reflecting love as the eve draws near Whispering flurries speak to my soul To tell of beauty that makes one lose control Where shimmering lights sparkle within space Flowing gently transporting to another place All while caressing thoughts so transparent Allowing ones true motives to become apparent
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Date: 1/22/2020 5:57:00 AM
You my friend are letting your natural and immense poetic gift shine ever so brightly with this magnificent piece. Rhyming, flow and romantic nuance are all stellar and so truly delightful to read and enjoy! A fav.. a gleaming gem too....
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/22/2020 7:47:00 PM
Robert thank you so much!;)
Date: 1/19/2020 10:05:00 AM
Wow -- this is seriously good stuff! When you are at your best, Brenda, you do so make your rhyming poetry simply skip along -- and this is the perfect example! Alexander Pope would have surely rated this very highly...as the acknowledged master of the "Heroic Couplet" he would have almost certainly lavished rich praise upon your enchanting and charming little poem, of that I am most certain. Loved it!! Affectionate wishes. :) john
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/20/2020 9:43:00 PM
Ahhh thx John! And I will strive for that best if I continue getting such wonderful comments from you!;) hugs!;)
Date: 1/12/2020 6:11:00 PM
Hi Brenda, Congratulations on your placement. Lovely rhymes that move your words forward.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/13/2020 5:25:00 AM
Thank you Sam!;)
Date: 1/12/2020 3:36:00 PM
Congrats, Brenda!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/13/2020 5:25:00 AM
LJ thank you so very much!;)
Date: 1/12/2020 2:38:00 PM
Wonderful poem Brenda, congratulations on your win :)
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/13/2020 5:25:00 AM
Sandy thank you so much!;)
Date: 1/12/2020 2:08:00 PM
A lovely poem Brenda, congrats. :)
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/13/2020 5:25:00 AM
Gary thank you I appreciate your visit!;)
Date: 1/12/2020 1:15:00 PM
A wonderful mix of imagery and romance, congrats on your win Bren. Hugs, John
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/12/2020 1:33:00 PM
Thanks so much John ! I really appreciate your visit!;)
Date: 1/12/2020 9:56:00 AM
You have created magical imagery, Brenda. Through your words, the reader feels like they are on the scene. I especially love the passage: "beauty that makes one lose control." That is a feeling we're sometimes lucky enough to experience. Nicely done! Best wishes, Carolyn
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/12/2020 1:33:00 PM
Thank you Carolyn so very much!;)
Date: 1/11/2020 10:11:00 AM
A piece filled with great imagery Brenda, you really have a art with these kinds of poetry. Blessings, Gordon
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/11/2020 5:11:00 PM
Thank you Gordon! I guess if it's not broken I won't fix it!;)
Date: 1/10/2020 8:05:00 PM
making nature sensuous and romantic, Brenda. NICE!!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/11/2020 5:10:00 PM
Thank you so much Andrea!;)
Date: 1/9/2020 2:26:00 PM
This, even with all the poetic imagery, is one hot poem, Brenda! :) gw
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/9/2020 6:17:00 PM
Lol thank you Gershon! See still brought a smile to my face!;)
Date: 1/9/2020 4:51:00 AM
Twirling, reflecting, shimmering....I love your dancing, prancing words, Brenda!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/9/2020 5:09:00 AM
Ah my county friend! I do love to dance a fact I cannot lie about! It is so much fun!;) thank you so much Caren!;)

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