Brenda Chiri Poet Rhyme

True Motives

Moonbeams kiss on 
luscious curves of love
To reach and Stretch 
from skies above
Crystal snow flakes 
begin to dance
On frigid winters breeze 
as if by chance
Joining together before 
this winters eve
Harmonizing making 
ones heart believe
Twirling shinning bright 
as stars appear
Reflecting love as the 
eve draws near
Whispering flurries 
speak to my soul 
To tell of beauty that 
makes one lose control
Where shimmering lights 
sparkle within space
Flowing gently transporting 
to another place
All while caressing 
thoughts so transparent
Allowing ones true motives 
to become apparent


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Robert Lindley January 22, 2020 at 5:57 AM You my friend are letting your natural and immense poetic gift shine ever so brightly with this magnificent piece. Rhyming, flow and romantic nuance are all stellar and so truly delightful to read and enjoy! A fav.. a gleaming gem too.... Brenda Chiri January 22, 2020 at 7:47 PM Robert thank you so much!;)

John Fleming January 19, 2020 at 10:05 AM Wow -- this is seriously good stuff! When you are at your best, Brenda, you do so make your rhyming poetry simply skip along -- and this is the perfect example! Alexander Pope would have surely rated this very highly...as the acknowledged master of the "Heroic Couplet" he would have almost certainly lavished rich praise upon your enchanting and charming little poem, of that I am most certain. Loved it!! Affectionate wishes. :) john Brenda Chiri January 20, 2020 at 9:43 PM Ahhh thx John! And I will strive for that best if I continue getting such wonderful comments from you!;) hugs!;)

Sam Kauffman January 12, 2020 at 6:11 PM Hi Brenda, Congratulations on your placement. Lovely rhymes that move your words forward. Brenda Chiri January 13, 2020 at 5:25 AM Thank you Sam!;)

L. J. Carber January 12, 2020 at 3:36 PM Congrats, Brenda! Brenda Chiri January 13, 2020 at 5:25 AM LJ thank you so very much!;)

Sandra Adams January 12, 2020 at 2:38 PM Wonderful poem Brenda, congratulations on your win :) Brenda Chiri January 13, 2020 at 5:25 AM Sandy thank you so much!;)

Gary Smith January 12, 2020 at 2:08 PM A lovely poem Brenda, congrats. :) Brenda Chiri January 13, 2020 at 5:25 AM Gary thank you I appreciate your visit!;)

John Gondolf January 12, 2020 at 1:15 PM A wonderful mix of imagery and romance, congrats on your win Bren. Hugs, John Brenda Chiri January 12, 2020 at 1:33 PM Thanks so much John ! I really appreciate your visit!;)

Carolyn Devonshire January 12, 2020 at 9:56 AM You have created magical imagery, Brenda. Through your words, the reader feels like they are on the scene. I especially love the passage: "beauty that makes one lose control." That is a feeling we're sometimes lucky enough to experience. Nicely done! Best wishes, Carolyn Brenda Chiri January 12, 2020 at 1:33 PM Thank you Carolyn so very much!;)

Gordon Mcconnell January 11, 2020 at 10:11 AM A piece filled with great imagery Brenda, you really have a art with these kinds of poetry. Blessings, Gordon Brenda Chiri January 11, 2020 at 5:11 PM Thank you Gordon! I guess if it's not broken I won't fix it!;)

Andrea Dietrich January 10, 2020 at 8:05 PM making nature sensuous and romantic, Brenda. NICE!! Brenda Chiri January 11, 2020 at 5:10 PM Thank you so much Andrea!;)

Gershon Wolf January 9, 2020 at 2:26 PM This, even with all the poetic imagery, is one hot poem, Brenda! :) gw Brenda Chiri January 9, 2020 at 6:17 PM Lol thank you Gershon! See still brought a smile to my face!;)

Caren Krutsinger January 9, 2020 at 4:51 AM Twirling, reflecting, shimmering....I love your dancing, prancing words, Brenda! Brenda Chiri January 9, 2020 at 5:09 AM Ah my county friend! I do love to dance a fact I cannot lie about! It is so much fun!;) thank you so much Caren!;)