True Loves Kiss

I see your eye's in the dawning light,
how the glisten with the morning rays,
slowly I start to drift away,
to a world of misty haze.

As your eye's roll across my face,
I feel there warm embrace,
emotions stir deep down inside,
feelings to hard describe.

You look lovingly into my eye's,
now my feelings I cannot hide,
trapped within your caressing gaze.
increasingly my heart starts to race.

Overcome by a rushing wave,
my lips start to quiver as I anticipate,
you run your fingers slowly through my hair,
then effortlessly you pull me near.

As our lips touch for the first time
all your emotions I feel inside,
in my arms your head gently lays,
lost in the symphony of love we just made.

Contest: Little Viewed Jewels - 6th place

M.Mahauariki © 2012
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Taylor Avatar
January 31, 2012 at 6:01 PM
Congrats, Murray. Excellent piece. Nice going. Ralph
Merryman Avatar
January 31, 2012 at 3:22 PM
Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
Brown Avatar
January 31, 2012 at 12:50 PM
Congratulations on your super win today in Susan's "Little Viewed Jewels" contest Murray. Love, Carol
Mahauariki Avatar
January 31, 2012 at 11:53 AM
Thank you everyone, was a bit unexpected,. I struggle to write in this form, or just about love in general, but, since joining this site, I have been trying to broaden my outlook on things...
Scholtz Avatar
January 31, 2012 at 10:47 AM
congratulations on your win Murray. Elizabeth
Williams Avatar
January 31, 2012 at 10:42 AM
Murray congrats on your win..David
Sweetheart Avatar
January 31, 2012 at 9:22 AM
congrats Murray on another amazing win for this tender poetry luv..
Quigley Avatar
January 31, 2012 at 8:22 AM
Very seductive write Murray. Well done. Congratulations
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