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True Love Serves

true love remains independent of surrounds~ serving silently First position Brain strand competition

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Beryl Edmonds

Date: 2/13/2021 8:01:00 AM

True love serves best, whether one lives in a castle or in a shed. A wonderful write Rama ~ Belle

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/10/2021 2:19:00 PM

a little gem. Love that last line!

Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 2/10/2021 5:31:00 PM

Thanks Andrea

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/9/2021 1:03:00 PM

Serving itself, a reward.

Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 2/10/2021 5:31:00 PM

True Kim

Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 2/9/2021 7:31:00 AM

lovely senryu Rama! and so true! congrats on your win!

Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 2/9/2021 9:27:00 AM

Thanks and same to you. Take care Rama

Harry Horsman

Date: 2/9/2021 12:24:00 AM

It defeats all. Rama, great senryu.

Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 2/9/2021 3:18:00 AM

It defeats all. Yes well said and I agree. Thanks for your positive comment.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/8/2021 5:07:00 PM

Strong statement, Rama. Much needed in this age of narcissism. ~ Service with a Smile! :)

Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 2/9/2021 3:14:00 AM

Yes service with smile, a solution to all problems. Have a wonderful day ahead.Take care, Rama

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/8/2021 2:18:00 PM

There is still some true love out there but I wonder really how much. Thanks for the visit to my page with encouragement for the contest. Sara

Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 2/9/2021 3:17:00 AM

I find it rare. I agree with you. I love to read your wonderful poems. You will see me often

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/8/2021 10:55:00 AM

Love is giving more than taking. Well said. ~~

Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 2/9/2021 3:15:00 AM

Thanks for your uplifting comment. Yes love gives and only gives without expecting.