True Love Serves

true love remains independent of surrounds~ serving silently
First position Brain strand competition
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Edmonds  Avatar
February 13, 2021 at 8:01 AM
True love serves best, whether one lives in a castle or in a shed. A wonderful write Rama ~ Belle
Dietrich Avatar
February 10, 2021 at 2:19 PM
a little gem. Love that last line!
Balasubramanian Avatar
February 10, 2021 at 5:31 PM
Thanks Andrea
Rodrigues Avatar
February 9, 2021 at 1:03 PM
Serving itself, a reward.
Balasubramanian Avatar
February 10, 2021 at 5:31 PM
True Kim
Radhakrishna Avatar
February 9, 2021 at 7:31 AM
lovely senryu Rama! and so true! congrats on your win!
Balasubramanian Avatar
February 9, 2021 at 9:27 AM
Thanks and same to you. Take care Rama
Horsman Avatar
February 9, 2021 at 12:24 AM
It defeats all. Rama, great senryu.
Balasubramanian Avatar
February 9, 2021 at 3:18 AM
It defeats all. Yes well said and I agree. Thanks for your positive comment.
Wolf Avatar
February 8, 2021 at 5:07 PM
Strong statement, Rama. Much needed in this age of narcissism. ~ Service with a Smile! :)
Balasubramanian Avatar
February 9, 2021 at 3:14 AM
Yes service with smile, a solution to all problems. Have a wonderful day ahead.Take care, Rama
Kendrick Avatar
February 8, 2021 at 2:18 PM
There is still some true love out there but I wonder really how much. Thanks for the visit to my page with encouragement for the contest. Sara
Balasubramanian Avatar
February 9, 2021 at 3:17 AM
I find it rare. I agree with you. I love to read your wonderful poems. You will see me often
Buhagiar Avatar
February 8, 2021 at 10:55 AM
Love is giving more than taking. Well said. ~~
Balasubramanian Avatar
February 9, 2021 at 3:15 AM
Thanks for your uplifting comment. Yes love gives and only gives without expecting.
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