True Love

I was madly in love
     Before we even met.
I was always a worrier but
     With you all I did was fret.

Would you be on time?
     Or would you be late?
The answer was, neither.
     We had to meet early, it was fate.

I wanted to look into your
     Beautiful, baby blue eyes.
You had dark, wavy hair & bright
     Red lips, what a surprise.

I kissed your forehead &
     With tears of joy I said "hello",
You were a dream come true & 
     My tiny little 5 pound 14 ounce  fellow.

I finally knew what it
    Was to be someone's mother.
It was true love like I'd
     Never felt with any other.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2007


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Date: 3/30/2009 5:10:00 AM
This is awesome,, u just carried me to a unexpected beautiful finish. Start sounded like so ordinary until i read the finsh, This amazing stuff. This deserves to be top poetry
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Date: 3/4/2009 8:23:00 AM
awww that is adorable...
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Date: 7/24/2008 11:18:00 AM
Oh, the elation and love of a parent is simply wonderful to observe and be a part of. The flow of your words was smooth with the perfect rhyme scheme and the imagery is clear and so related to. Very well written. Michael
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