True Love

TRUE LOVE
no, no hardships no pain
but sheer absolute super gain 
in an ecstatic experience of love
which flows everywhere like pious dove

love is spontaneity and spontaneity is love
pinnace of all your emotions is love
the perplexions of mind might sway
but should be kept smooth quietly away.

the bird that sings, and glow worm that shines
can't express, even part of love's shrine
as its a feeling which can drive you insane
with lot to loose but little to gain

the ones who cheer about it, can't express it fully
but those who lost it, despite loving there love truly
the feeling with little worth in this material universe
but a feeling which can obliterate all your curse.

a thought on your love's theme is god
which can make happy even your final nod
love serve those who practice it with eternity
and serve others with unbiased fraternity

                                                                BY -:  AKASH SANGWAN

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 5/11/2014 6:27:00 AM
Wonderful write on love Akash! Rays of optimism till eternity,,, great ! Congrats on fine win !
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Date: 5/11/2014 2:15:00 AM
Akash, Thank you for everything, CONGRATULATIONS!!! Have yourself a wonderful night, and a beautiful mother's days.... (enjoy my latest blog if you like) xox~ Linda"
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