True Love

You are to me my true love. Tell me, am I yours? Forever? For Dr.Ram Mehta's contest 'Quinzaine' 10th place

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Danny Stinson

Date: 12/9/2011 7:42:00 PM

This is a lovely piece.

Matthew Anish

Date: 8/28/2011 4:06:00 PM

Touching short poem! I think it is a senryu - it is not about nature. Keep 'em coming Matthew Anish

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/18/2011 8:11:00 AM

Congratulations Emma on your win in the contest of Dr. Ram Mehta "Quinzaine" Love, Carol

Wilma Neels

Date: 7/17/2011 1:43:00 PM

Emma congratulations on your win in the contest ;)

John Freeman

Date: 7/16/2011 12:43:00 PM

Emma, A thoughful idea. Agape, Moses

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/15/2011 8:16:00 PM

Emma, I really like yours and would put it even higher on the list! Congrats on this romantic poem.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/15/2011 7:02:00 PM

Congrats Emma on your sweet success in the contest with this romantic write luv..

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 7/15/2011 3:58:00 PM

sweet sentiment. i sure hope it's returned! congratulations on your win!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/15/2011 3:05:00 PM

Enjoyed your expressions on love and a querry on it, Emma. Congratulation on the win in my contest,

Judy Ball

Date: 7/15/2011 7:57:00 AM

Ahh, So much emotion in such few words. Good job. God Bles, JB

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/14/2011 9:04:00 PM

this is really nice, Emma. I think Dr. Ram should love it!

Judy Ball

Date: 7/13/2011 4:46:00 PM

Very nice my friend. The thing with this type of poetry is saying much with few words and you have done this well. Good job. God Bless, JB