True Love

On the ground 
laid his heart 
like a rock. 

No one knew 
the reason 
why it's stiff. 

But one soul 
has tamed it 
like a sheep. 

January 28, 2023

Tricube Poetry Contest (6th place)
Sponsored by: Sara Kendrick

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Sara Kendrick

January 30, 2023 at 4:51 AM

Sad that by his taming, he lost his true self. His taming should have brought out the best and help the worst disappear. Thank you for your participation in my contest. I enjoyed reading your entry. Very creative way to go. Sara

Roger Roger

January 30, 2023 at 12:22 PM

Thank you very much... I guess it's true love when a heart of stone changes completely to become obedient to someone...