Sandip Goswami Poet Diamante

True Essence

Religion
                                             holy, peaceful
                                      serving, loving, dedicating
                               harbingers, wishers, speakers, sellers
                                   separating, competing, fighting
                                            narrow, isolated
                                                community
                                 
                                                community
                                            selfish, bellicose
                                     hating, disbelieving, thinking
                                  saints, bishops, saviors, pioneers
                                  committing, secularizing, uniting
                                            fraternal, human
                                                  Religion 


    
 SOUHARDYA GOSWAMI, INDIA
(The poem was written by my son Souhardya Who is 14+ years old. He is inspired by every great poet in POETRYSOUP.)

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Andrea Dietrich August 16, 2016 at 3:46 PM tell your son he is showing signs of a budding poet! LIke father, like son!

Poet Destroyer A February 20, 2016 at 11:03 PM sandip, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA

Afolabi Muideen July 25, 2015 at 2:39 AM This is extremely excellence, a wonderful penned, oh he is great..........A.M.

M. L. Kiser July 24, 2015 at 11:47 PM Your Diamante has hit the target; beautifuly done.

Skat A July 6, 2015 at 10:26 PM lovely diamante:), enjoyed reading ~Luv SKAT

Pandita Sietesantos July 6, 2015 at 10:15 PM Excellent double Diamante! I congratulate your son on this brilliant piece especially since it was penned by one so young! BRAVO and I rate it a solid "7"! Warmest regards. Pandita

Judy Konos July 6, 2015 at 7:05 AM Excellent Poetry as usual...remember as Charmaine said, avoid salt.

Charmaine Chircop July 5, 2015 at 6:14 PM Religion can indeed help us get closer or divides us.. A great message from your 'son'. Re yr comjent : I'm sorry for your 'High blood pressure',Eat plenty of garlic, and avoid salt : ). Guess I told you that already .