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True Camel's

On African deserts you must be wary, Of the famous one humped Dromedary. He is jealous of his Asian brother, Who has that hump and then another! That Bactrian camel (the one with two humps) Must slow way down when crossing bumps! When those humps hit they go, "Ker-Splatt!" Did you know those things are filled with fat? Bactrian camel's are handsome guys, With long thick brows around their eyes! With those two humps and pretty faces, They're very popular at the oasis! So that's the story of True Cammel's That happy, humpy desert mammal. On any desert you should be wise, Park your car and ride these guys! Copyright 2010 Karma Adamson Karma Copyright 2010 Karma Adamson

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Date: 9/9/2011 9:08:00 AM
LOL some are NOt too nice [they spit!] your form is RHYME actually you could have broken it up into two line grouping THEN it would be COUPLETS [which is a form of rhyme!] light & love
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