Truce

This rose will surely die Just as surely my love for you never will Sad and dry this occasional bloom But I can still smile knowing petrified love is still absolute beauty

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/10/2016 11:54:00 AM

Kevin, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA

Skat A

Date: 7/19/2015 4:41:00 PM

KEVIN, Stopped by to say hello, I enjoyed reading your poem today. FOREVER <3 SKAT

Kevin Allen

Date: 4/15/2010 10:17:00 AM

Thanks for the kind welcome and feedback, I'm looking forward to reading and writing with you all.

Faleshia Murphy

Date: 4/15/2010 8:50:00 AM

very nice write and welcome to poetry soup faleshia

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/15/2010 6:53:00 AM

Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets.. enjoyed your creative write..luv.. "Sweetheart"

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/15/2010 3:13:00 AM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Kevin. If you would like to have more of your poetry read please limit your postings to 3-5 poems per day. In doing this more of your poetry is read and other poets can also have theirs read. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol