Trout

flicking tail stirs reeds
water surface swells and ebbs -
trout chases dinner
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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January 20, 2016 at 8:11 PM
DAVID, I really enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing **SKAT**
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January 25, 2016 at 10:01 PM
Thank you, SKAT!
Delaney Avatar
January 1, 2016 at 12:19 PM
Came to wish you a happy new year. David, are you well, Hugs, SuZ
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January 25, 2016 at 10:00 PM
Dear Zus, sorry for the belated reply. Thank you for your kind wishes, and I reciprocate. Much love, David
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August 14, 2013 at 3:17 AM
- Miss your beautiful poem, David !!! - Have a nice day! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
A   Avatar
July 11, 2013 at 8:36 AM
a grand taste I'm sure it has, I don't think I'd ever turn myself to try it, enjoyed your haiku,~always, p.d.
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July 12, 2013 at 5:53 AM
Thanks for your visit and comments, Linda. Have a great weekend! David
Tacito Avatar
July 11, 2013 at 8:31 AM
Very, very well done! I'm not a fish kind of guy. But, I can very much appreciate the setting here. :)
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July 12, 2013 at 5:52 AM
Thanks, Drake! I appreciate your comments. David
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July 11, 2013 at 6:20 AM
.... Trout, is a good dinner - cooked on the grill. - Well done haiku, David. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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July 12, 2013 at 5:51 AM
Thanks, Anne-Lise. Have a great weekend!
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