Tropical Serenade

birds of 
            p a r a d i s e,
  lustrous flames 
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tangerine 
             tan /
                 / go
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May 10, 2025 at 8:35 AM
I love how you did the tango word! How clever! It shows for me somehow a couple in a moment, tangoing! Love that! Beautiful hiku as always sis! Im sure will do very well! So good to see you are enjoying writing these and your artistic mind can be seem through your hikus! Pleasure reading! Sending you light always
Jama Avatar
May 11, 2025 at 1:09 AM
Aw thank you so much, sis! I’m really happy the “tango” twist came through like that—it was meant to capture that moment of connection between two souls mid-dance. I’m grateful for your light and support always
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