Tropical Island Experience

I awoke to find myself on a tropical island
Searched and searched, feared I was alone
Nothing but palm trees and scorching sand
Was not afraid, for I was adventure prone.

Made a shelter, put palm fronds o’er my head
Found a small pond, and the water was good
For without water I would soon be dead
I needed to search, find out what I could.

Mosquitos were the first to welcome me
Biting and nipping, they wanted to stay
So, I dug up some mud and oh so bravely
Covered all my skin to keep them away

Found some coconuts but couldn’t open one up
Broke some rocks ‘till I had a sharp device
After some muscle, I finally found some sup
Ate the flesh, drank the milk, it was nice!

But then came the runs, I needed some meat
So, I broke some bamboo and made a sharp spear
I could now fish, but they needed some heat
Hard rocks struck together, made sparks appear.

Piled up dried grasses and twigs made a fire
But there was no one to share my lonely island 
And when my situation seemed the most dire
Along came a bird, my loneliness lightened.

Twas a colorful parrot, perched high in a tree
And out of his mouth came the sound of talking
At first I was so overwhelmed with great glee
To him it was language, to me just squawking!

Although not alone, I found food and shelter
I had survived just fine, conquered all my fear
And now I ask you, as I sit here and swelter…
Please tell me, what stupid jerk put me here?


1/10/2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 1/19/2017 7:12:00 AM
Hi Betty, this is such an excellent piece that reflects what it would be like stranded on a tropical island! I particularly love your wit!! It is colorful with great imagery! I am sure this piece will be a winner because Shadow will also love it! A-7 and good luck in the contest! Pandita
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