Tropical Dawn

tropical dawn...
rays of silky sunlight
dancing upon the drapes
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Dietrich Avatar
June 15, 2013 at 3:16 PM
Another one that is SCHWEEET!!! (do you like my try at 80's slang?(
Simmonds Avatar
June 26, 2013 at 7:30 AM
Like the slang a lot! And thanks for accepting my sunlight!
Merryman Avatar
June 15, 2013 at 1:54 PM
Nice haiku, Keith! Love, KIm
Simmonds Avatar
June 26, 2013 at 7:30 AM
I appreciate your kindness, Kim!
Cee Avatar
June 15, 2013 at 12:50 AM
Love to see the rays of silky sunlight really! have a nice day Keith!...Elai
Simmonds Avatar
June 26, 2013 at 7:32 AM
And a wonderful one to you, too! The tropics is the place for this kind of sunlight!
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