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Tropical Cyclone

Chrome metallic clouds Treacherous fluctuating waves Whispers of the storm

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/22/2010 1:32:00 PM
loved the last line, great work...Raul
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Date: 11/21/2010 6:19:00 AM
If that is the whispers, I would not want to ride out the first phase or the last..Very descriptive and expressive..I could just see the scene from viewing these on tv..I was encouraged and uplifted from your kind words about my work..Sara
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Date: 11/20/2010 10:20:00 PM
lovely Haiku Justin, beautiful imagery
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