Tropical Cyclone

Chrome metallic clouds Treacherous fluctuating waves Whispers of the storm
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Moreno Avatar
November 22, 2010 at 1:32 PM
loved the last line, great work...Raul
Kendrick Avatar
November 21, 2010 at 6:19 AM
If that is the whispers, I would not want to ride out the first phase or the last..Very descriptive and expressive..I could just see the scene from viewing these on tv..I was encouraged and uplifted from your kind words about my work..Sara
Roberts Avatar
November 20, 2010 at 10:20 PM
lovely Haiku Justin, beautiful imagery
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