Tropical Breeze

the trees were caressed....
   
                 by a tropical breeze....

                as they danced in unison....
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Strand Avatar
September 19, 2008 at 11:57 PM
Nice images that bring to mind the noisea,rgds D-nyce.RgdsBrian& thanks for your welcome observations
Yamin Avatar
September 19, 2008 at 4:45 PM
Deneen, What a beautiful description of the dance in unision of the tropical breeze. Most enchanting poem. Thanks for your invaluable comments on my poem The Autumn of Life. May I encourage you to read my poem The Aging Tree. See if it could be a story not of a tree.
Foulk Avatar
September 19, 2008 at 12:40 PM
so colorful and warm, such a beauty to read this fine poem.
Boak Avatar
September 19, 2008 at 2:51 AM
good painting with words...saw the trees in my mind...your words caressed my imagination...good work. John E
Lakhera Avatar
September 18, 2008 at 10:02 PM
Lovely imagery. It feels great to read something so real. Love Chitra
Spence Sr Avatar
September 18, 2008 at 5:06 PM
Yes! I like this imagery. I am now ready for a vacation in Jamaica after all the storms are gone. I really like this poem. Great job! ~Joseph
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