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Tropical Breeze

the trees were caressed.... by a tropical breeze.... as they danced in unison....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008


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Brian Strand
Date: 9/19/2008 11:57:00 PM
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Nice images that bring to mind the noisea,rgds D-nyce.RgdsBrian& thanks for your welcome observations
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Mohammad Yamin
Date: 9/19/2008 4:45:00 PM
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Deneen, What a beautiful description of the dance in unision of the tropical breeze. Most enchanting poem. Thanks for your invaluable comments on my poem The Autumn of Life. May I encourage you to read my poem The Aging Tree. See if it could be a story not of a tree.
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James Foulk
Date: 9/19/2008 12:40:00 PM
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so colorful and warm, such a beauty to read this fine poem.
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John Boak
Date: 9/19/2008 2:51:00 AM
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good painting with words...saw the trees in my mind...your words caressed my imagination...good work. John E
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Chitra Lakhera
Date: 9/18/2008 10:02:00 PM
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Lovely imagery. It feels great to read something so real. Love Chitra
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Joseph Spence Sr
Date: 9/18/2008 5:06:00 PM
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Yes! I like this imagery. I am now ready for a vacation in Jamaica after all the storms are gone. I really like this poem. Great job! ~Joseph
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