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Trixy

Long blonde hair
impulse stare
Leather jacket
 metal glare
ruby lips 
skin fair
wicked dreams
selfish cares

heated talk
simple mind
cold front
out of time

rancid couch
clammy heels
dusty snout
wheels and deals
tricksy miss
sticky legs
long limbs

phone rings
air still
cant walk 
cant feel
cloudy haze
crazy mess
cold sweats 

all bets
all time
lost chain
lost mind
out of time
outta time

-Jess

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/22/2011 6:14:00 PM
I like the short lines of this one. What was the dusty snout? I imagined a dog by her couch! Or maybe she was snorting cocaine? That's how the last part made me feel. LEt me see another poem.
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Date: 10/21/2011 9:10:00 AM
cool poem love the form p.d.
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