Tristich the Form

tears begin to fall.
emotion becomes a flood-
a cataract of regret flows


TRISTICH IS A PARALLEL VERSE(Inspired by Hebrew Biblical parallels) it comprises  L1 theme L2 ECHO of theme L3 Punchline/observation
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Burch Avatar
December 12, 2016 at 3:40 PM
Brian. I like this a lot. Would be a cool challenge. ;) big hugs. Deb
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December 12, 2016 at 4:30 PM
Yes indeed Deborah ,a rewarding three liner
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