Tristich Parallels

Wardrobes, full of clothes,
crossstitch cluttered walls-
her shadow still clouds my mind


TRISTICH IS A PARALLEL VERSE(Inspired by Hebrew Biblical parallels) it comprises  L1 theme L2 ECHO of theme L3 Punchline/observation
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Ligon Avatar
January 1, 2020 at 12:47 PM
Great parallel. The depth of meaning is well conveyed.
Strand Avatar
January 1, 2020 at 4:32 PM
Cheers Juliet.A creative 2020 ahead for you.
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