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tristich PARALLELS

Wardrobes, full of clothes,
crossstitch cluttered walls-
her shadow still clouds my mind


TRISTICH IS A PARALLEL VERSE(Inspired by Hebrew Biblical parallels) it comprises  L1 theme L2 ECHO of theme L3 Punchline/observation

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Date: 1/1/2020 12:47:00 PM
Great parallel. The depth of meaning is well conveyed.
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Brian Strand
Date: 1/1/2020 4:32:00 PM
Cheers Juliet.A creative 2020 ahead for you.