Brian Strand Poet Tristich

Tristich Again

Wardrobes, full of clothes,
crossstitch cluttered walls-
her shadow still clouds my mind


TRISTICH IS A PARALLEL VERSE(Inspired by Hebrew Biblical parallels) it comprises  L1 theme L2 ECHO of theme L3 Punchline/observation

You may hear me recite this tristich and more of my PS poetry on youtube under my pen name ichthyschiro

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Poet Destroyer A July 2, 2015 at 12:31 AM very tempted to go on youtube, enjoyed your write *luv, p.d. Brian Strand July 2, 2015 at 3:08 AM Thank you PD for your kind words.You tube is a good place to recite your poetry clips, but like the net in general it needs to be used with care.Rgds Brian

Nette Onclaud June 22, 2015 at 2:56 PM brian, love the word-paint; how endearing!.. i searched for tristich though most sites say it is a quatrain... any thoughts?... nonetheless, this is stunning!.. hugggs Brian Strand June 23, 2015 at 3:02 AM Hi Nette, Tristich is not a quatrain , quatrain by definition means 'four' whereas the 'tri' in tristich means three.For more info on Tristich see my edits in Wikipedia. Thanks for your always welcome comments and kind words.Have a good day.Rgds Brian

Jan Allison June 21, 2015 at 2:32 PM what a wonderful form Brian thank you for bringing it to soup:-) hugs jan xx Brian Strand June 23, 2015 at 3:07 AM Many thanks Jan for your kind words on my tristich form

Kim Merryman June 21, 2015 at 10:32 AM Is there a syllable count for the tristich? I like your poem, Brian. Love, Kim Brian Strand June 23, 2015 at 3:06 AM No Kim there is no syllable count in a tristich,the essence is the progressive parallelism.I have asked PS to include it here as a form. Thanks for your kind words.Rgds Brian