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Triple Helix From the Hip

"Triple Helix from the Hip" Triple helix stanzas strung together like pearls wisdom worn and swallowed like a pill sweet and bitter they evolve those others from their bad dreams like poetry cradling their purity in sentences that speak their godliness as if they have done no wrong shooting nonchalantly from the hip killing their nemesis silently with dark strokes like bullets from guns, cowboys toting innocence they evolve golden and terrible hissing as they hymn like sleek green reptilians they take cheap shots of triple helix like rum they breathe it in and expel it like steam, lit on fire from their sewers of nowhere some kind of contesting baptism, immersed in garbage if only they could extinguish the lesser chord that which exists within them but they are oblivious to the nature of their true self they’re pure without fault condensed and sweetened disingenuous glowing unicorns with very loose horns blown, as if they’ve never done no wrong listing remedies from solitary minds that sink their fangs and glistening smiles into the gormless congregation like rattlesnakes strange medicine men they portend survival against all odds even death the unacknowledged who don’t remember where they sit at any table yet, they'll write their way in they are necessary the true lost, they are a new evolution dripping adulation in baptismal fonts of dopamine marking their poetic vanity on humanity like they crushed a slam dunk on sanity (LadyLabyrinth / 2023) "they were human once"...

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Date: 1/19/2023 1:54:00 AM
"Strange is your language and I have no decoder Why don't you make your intentions clear With eyes to the sun and your mouth to the soda Saying, "Tell me the truth, you got nothing to fear Stop staring at me like a bird of prey I'm all mixed up, I got nothing to sayI don't remember I don't remember I don't remember, I don't recall I got no memory of anything at all..."
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 1/19/2023 1:55:00 AM
Your Honour, I do not recall...
Date: 1/18/2023 11:24:00 AM
My shot at this--they are "oblivious to the nature of their true self" so anything they do, they write, they say... is a visceral reaction.. not a mindful perception with any concrete value.. like fiat money.. not backed by gold. Your words cut clean and precise to the bone.. straight through "the lesser chord"
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 1/18/2023 5:02:00 PM
In a place of 'sanctuary' such as this, one must write what thou wilt, whether accepted or not. I would prefer to see more 'poets' positively encouraging each other, rather than disparaging others motives, feelings, thoughts. All comes from the heart in one way or another. If you can't stand for what you are reading, let alone what you are writing, move onto another page. But write you must, if you are a 'poet', and your truth will be weighed for what it is worth in other's eyes and minds - some will have no problem translating through empathy, others have far to go....but this is their journey, and we are all on our own journeys. At the end of the day, the worth that is weighed, is discovered in your own thoughts and feelings.
Date: 1/18/2023 8:55:00 AM
"I Don't Remember"/ Peter Gabriel
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 1/19/2023 2:07:00 AM
...the base is - sublime.
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 1/18/2023 7:59:00 PM
LYRICS / https://www.songfacts.com/lyrics/peter-gabriel/i-dont-remember
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 1/18/2023 8:55:00 AM
https://youtu.be/87yl5pbF-ZI

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