Triple Delight

Sweetened fair caress
Dreaming sallow mountaintops
Bleached yummy delight

Mello crimson mix
Sensing scarlet falling leaves
Mouthwatering pleasure

Russet mixed within
Cheerless delighting nature
Succumbs emotions


written for
Sponsor Poet Destroyer ~ A  
Contest Name Neapolitan Ice Cream (HAIKU)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Crisci Avatar
October 7, 2011 at 12:40 PM
Congratulations, Cecil on your first place in P. D. contest, " Neapolitan Ice Cream. " You have written an amazing Haiku...I also succumb to emotions when I eat it. I wish you the best. Hugs, Andrew.
Brown Avatar
October 7, 2011 at 8:03 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Neapolitan Ice Cream (Haiku)" contest Cecil. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
October 7, 2011 at 12:40 AM
Congrats Cecil on first place win with this yummy delight my friend..luv..
Ramage Avatar
October 6, 2011 at 10:32 PM
Very nice. Well done and congratulations on your first place win. Lee
Foster Avatar
October 6, 2011 at 9:45 PM
Congratulations Cecil... a yummy mix of delights...cheers Margaret
Scripca Avatar
October 6, 2011 at 8:17 PM
Congratulations on your big, big win!!! Well-deserved!!!
Song Avatar
October 6, 2011 at 4:30 PM
A romance with neapolitan, eh? This is too sweet! Congrats on turning your ice cream write into sensuous pleasure! A gold medal write!!! Gwendolen
Devonshire Avatar
October 6, 2011 at 1:43 PM
Ah, methings this is about more than ice cream, dear Cecil. Congratulations on taking first place! Love, Carolyn
A   Avatar
October 6, 2011 at 11:23 AM
CONGRATULATIONS!!! CECIL~Thank you for your #1 in my ice cream haiku,,,, Enjoyed the way you meshed sweetness and nature.,,, have yourself a nice and wonderful day,,, GOD BLESS,..P.D.
Brown Avatar
September 30, 2011 at 1:01 PM
I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry today Cecil. A chart topper for sure. I wish you a most enjoyable weekend with lots of sunshine and happy thoughts. Love, Carol
A   Avatar
September 29, 2011 at 10:26 PM
wow! I was waiting to find an entry delight mixed with nature... oops !! snooping on my entries.. have a nice one,..p.d.
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