Notes About The Poem
This is a modified Triolet. The fourth line breaks the pattern. I tried not to modify the form too much.
Triolet Cosmos Particles
I am particles in Cosmos.
Glimmers through the wise vast starlight
Universal peace wanted most
Bright galaxies that spin so close
Heaven blazes in the white night.
I am particles in Cosmos,
Glimmering across wise starlight.
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