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Triku

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The Moth and The Flame | The Mystical Path

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Triku Toiling beetles in the clime whilst floats a tethered weathered butterfly Dreamt woods tapestry whilst wraith forest mural sketch a well-drawn sapling Flames bolt a waxen cell whilst predators flicker and sparks trap's a moth 2020 June 03 *1st Place* Fresh Traditional HAIKU (5-7-5) ~~JCB Burl

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Jcb Brul
Date: 6/7/2020 8:55:00 AM
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Such a unique Haiku! Congrats!
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Hilo Poet
Date: 6/7/2020 10:58:00 AM
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My heartfelt thanks, JCB -- Aloha~@wk
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 6/6/2020 1:35:00 PM
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Very, very creative, WK! Love the blending of three themes into a "triku." Great idea! And, as always, stunning imagery! Congratulations!
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Hilo Poet
Date: 6/6/2020 1:59:00 PM
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Truly grateful for your thoughtfulness my friend, Sam -- Aloha~@wk
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/6/2020 10:31:00 AM
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Loved the imagery of the sapling blended with a mural. Congratulations on your win William :)
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Hilo Poet
Date: 6/6/2020 12:16:00 PM
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I am appreciative of your thoughtful share, Aditi -- Aloha~@wk
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Jan Allison
Date: 6/6/2020 6:50:00 AM
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lovely imagery William:-) hugs Jan xx
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Hilo Poet
Date: 6/6/2020 12:15:00 PM
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Many thanks, Jan -- Aloha~@wk

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