William Kelii Kekaula Poet Haiku

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Triku

Triku

Toiling beetles in
the clime whilst floats a tethered
weathered butterfly

Dreamt woods tapestry
whilst wraith forest mural sketch
a well-drawn sapling

Flames bolt a waxen
cell whilst predators flicker
and sparks trap's a moth

     2020 June 03     

*1st Place*

Fresh Traditional HAIKU (5-7-5)
~~JCB Burl

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JC Brul June 7, 2020 at 8:55 AM Such a unique Haiku! Congrats! William Kelii Kekaula June 7, 2020 at 10:58 AM My heartfelt thanks, JCB -- Aloha~@wk

Sam Kauffman June 6, 2020 at 1:35 PM Very, very creative, WK! Love the blending of three themes into a "triku." Great idea! And, as always, stunning imagery! Congratulations! William Kelii Kekaula June 6, 2020 at 1:59 PM Truly grateful for your thoughtfulness my friend, Sam -- Aloha~@wk

Aditi Mishra June 6, 2020 at 10:31 AM Loved the imagery of the sapling blended with a mural. Congratulations on your win William :) William Kelii Kekaula June 6, 2020 at 12:16 PM I am appreciative of your thoughtful share, Aditi -- Aloha~@wk

Jan Allison June 6, 2020 at 6:50 AM lovely imagery William:-) hugs Jan xx William Kelii Kekaula June 6, 2020 at 12:15 PM Many thanks, Jan -- Aloha~@wk