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''Tricks''

Steep waterfall. Slip of feet. Dare devil Dylan.

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Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 6/1/2011 7:51:00 AM

I have an 8 year old boy, and this sounds a lot like something he would do. Nice Senryu. Thank you for reading my poetry. Your comments are much appreciated! I can tell you actually read them! ~JSLambert Esquire

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/28/2011 4:00:00 PM

what a cute senryu and who is Dylan?

Kacey Greenlee
Date: 5/28/2011 4:42:00 PM

Thank you so much,I enjoyed writing this.The Dylan I am talking about is my nine yr. old son.He is a character.Have a great evening my friend.Kacey

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/28/2011 1:20:00 PM

Funny and witty write, Kacey

Kacey Greenlee
Date: 5/28/2011 4:44:00 PM

Thank you Dr. Ram Mehta.I really liked writing this.It was fun.Have a great evening,Kacey