''Tricks''

Steep waterfall.
Slip of feet.
Dare devil Dylan.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Mister Roboto Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 7:51 AM
I have an 8 year old boy, and this sounds a lot like something he would do. Nice Senryu. Thank you for reading my poetry. Your comments are much appreciated! I can tell you actually read them! ~JSLambert Esquire
Dietrich Avatar
May 28, 2011 at 4:00 PM
what a cute senryu and who is Dylan?
Greenlee Avatar
May 28, 2011 at 4:42 PM
Thank you so much,I enjoyed writing this.The Dylan I am talking about is my nine yr. old son.He is a character.Have a great evening my friend.Kacey
Mehta Avatar
May 28, 2011 at 1:20 PM
Funny and witty write, Kacey
Greenlee Avatar
May 28, 2011 at 4:44 PM
Thank you Dr. Ram Mehta.I really liked writing this.It was fun.Have a great evening,Kacey
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