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Steep waterfall. Slip of feet. Dare devil Dylan.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/1/2011 7:51:00 AM
I have an 8 year old boy, and this sounds a lot like something he would do. Nice Senryu. Thank you for reading my poetry. Your comments are much appreciated! I can tell you actually read them! ~JSLambert Esquire
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Date: 5/28/2011 4:00:00 PM
what a cute senryu and who is Dylan?
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Kacey Greenlee
Date: 5/28/2011 4:42:00 PM
Thank you so much,I enjoyed writing this.The Dylan I am talking about is my nine yr. old son.He is a character.Have a great evening my friend.Kacey
Date: 5/28/2011 1:20:00 PM
Funny and witty write, Kacey
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Kacey Greenlee
Date: 5/28/2011 4:44:00 PM
Thank you Dr. Ram Mehta.I really liked writing this.It was fun.Have a great evening,Kacey