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*A true story. A sad story in our part of town so many years ago. The driver could have pulled into her own driveway but chose to drive on. So many mistakes in this tragic situation. Three of her friends died that night. My daughter knew them. As a parent I was mad for so many reasons. We identify when our child is the same age. Why would a parent of a new driver let her carry several friends in the vehicle, out after midnight? She was a brand new driver! And this particular house was under constant attack. That is why the father decided to find out who.
A truly tragic story! 

TRICK TREAT CRASH bullied time after time after time rolling is funny but as time goes by and by humor says goodbye falling leaves dying and dying line crossed after midnight father is on a vendetta to snap and snap rolling up to one of the cars taking pictures of the license plate the other car speeds on and on the driver of the getaway car has had her license for a moment, a moment in time, she turns off her lights in the dead of night the shadowy car wraps and wraps itself around an innocent tree, the victim’s father cries and cries, as he finds his daughter’s classmates beside himself on court tv, in its early days he lives his shame over and over again a lesson to be learned, by the impulsive! think and think, before you follow your instincts! 10/4/2017

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Date: 10/5/2017 3:29:00 PM
Such a sad piece and a hard way to learn
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/5/2017 9:17:00 PM
It is those that come after them that learn. So sad.
Date: 10/5/2017 10:59:00 AM
What a horrible story Kim.... Such a tragedy.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/5/2017 9:16:00 PM
Yes, Darren! It was so awful.
Date: 10/4/2017 9:00:00 AM
Yes, think before you follow your instincts! I understand that! Your instincts can get you into deep trouble, like this man has within your poem! I loved reading your incredible piece this morning, Great work my friend!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/4/2017 12:17:00 PM
Thanks, Russell. We all learn life lessons, sometimes in the worst way.

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