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Trials of the Mind

Hold me near to your chest as I weep- It has been long since I walked this mile, Thoughts rotting inside me, I feel vile The trials of my mind I shall always keep.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/4/2008 5:21:00 PM
The mind is a trial, all of its own--however, that is why I learn to think with soul, in all it knows/feels/understands etc....the soul is evolved to a greater consciousness than that of the mind--the mind is so sick. Best wishes, Sara:)
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Date: 12/3/2008 7:51:00 PM
Sounds dark but hopefully things will get better! Great way of expressing ! Laura :)
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