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~Trials And Pain~ (Rhyme) Some folks may choose death over life In all the midst of their strife But I've always chosen heartedly Life because I believe guardedly That what really define us in the end Is the choices that we make my friend Who we choose when we have to face any Adversity or what we may see as a tragedy. Who we choose to be and how we react to it Is what mold us and shapes us every bit How we respond to each trial and suffering Is of the utmost importance of our living. Let's not be dictated against our judgement or stir away From our goals by other peoples opinions, or events, yea. Master-minded by life or executed by the ravishes time, Both which may show us no compassion at all under any clime. Let's not be mislead or wrongly misguided every day To act in a rash manner when unfortunate deeds are at play For our emotions we must master, and not in any way or time be Controlled by them, for as we know emotions come and flee So many in our hearts we breed them and often from the world conceal They may come and go as freely as they please and we may feel. Our thoughts breath them with life, and shape them in many forms each day. There's always room for improvement as they are in the sky all the stars, But you should learn, accept and like yourself, the person that you are. Love life and embrace it,love yourself every single day to, Be kind but strong, remember,that in Gods perfect image you were created too, Trials and pain can break us or help us grow positivity all the way through. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2014 January.20.2015

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Date: 2/5/2015 7:47:00 AM
Really liked this Dorian, thanks.
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Date: 3/6/2015 8:35:00 PM
Thank you so kindly again, Karl, for stopping by and commenting. Much appreciated dear friend! Wishing a very lovely evening!In His light! God bless you! :)D.
Date: 1/25/2015 5:44:00 PM
I like this. It gets a 7 from me.
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Date: 3/6/2015 8:35:00 PM
Thank you so kindly again, Kimberly, for stopping by and commenting. Much appreciated dear friend! Wishing a very lovely evening!In His light! God bless you! :)D.
Date: 1/20/2015 1:22:00 PM
Honest, true and quite well penned. An important message for all.
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Date: 3/6/2015 8:34:00 PM
Thank you so kindly again, M.L. Kiser, for stopping by and commenting. Much appreciated dear friend! Wishing a very lovely evening!In His light! God bless you! :)D.
Date: 1/20/2015 12:40:00 AM
I liked it...well done
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Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 3/6/2015 8:33:00 PM
Thank you so kindly again,Michael, for stopping by and commenting. Much appreciated dear friend! Wishing a very lovely evening!In His light! God bless you! :)D. "

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