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Trials and Pain

~Trials And Pain~ 
(Rhyme) 


Some folks may choose death over life 
In all the midst of their strife 
But I've always chosen heartedly 
Life because I believe guardedly 
That what really define us in the end 
Is the choices that we make my friend 
Who we choose when we have to face any 
Adversity or what we may see as a tragedy. 
Who we choose to be and how we react to it 
Is what mold us and shapes us every bit 
How we respond to each trial and suffering 
Is of the utmost importance of our living. 
Let's not be dictated against our judgement or stir away 
From our goals by other peoples opinions, or events, yea. 

Master-minded by life or executed by the ravishes time, 
Both which may show us no compassion at all under any clime. 
Let's not be mislead or wrongly misguided every day 
To act in a rash manner when unfortunate deeds are at play 
For our emotions we must master, and not in any way or time be 
Controlled by them, for as we know emotions come and flee 
So many in our hearts we breed them and often from the world conceal 
They may come and go as freely as they please and we may feel. 
Our thoughts breath them with life, and shape them in many forms each day. 
There's always room for improvement as they are in the sky all the stars, 
But you should learn, accept and like yourself, the person that you are. 
Love life and embrace it,love yourself every single day to, 
Be kind but strong, remember,that in Gods perfect image you were created too, 
Trials and pain can break us or help us grow positivity all the way through. 


Dorian Petersen Potter 
aka ladydp2000 
copyright@2014


January.20.2015

Copyright © Dorian Petersen Potter | Year Posted 2015

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Karl Mcdonnell Date: 2/5/2015 7:47:00 AM Really liked this Dorian, thanks. Login to Reply Dorian Petersen Potter Date: 3/6/2015 8:35:00 PM Thank you so kindly again, Karl, for stopping by and commenting. Much appreciated dear friend! Wishing a very lovely evening!In His light! God bless you! :)D.

Kimberly Lowe-West Date: 1/25/2015 5:44:00 PM I like this. It gets a 7 from me. Login to Reply Dorian Petersen Potter Date: 3/6/2015 8:35:00 PM Thank you so kindly again, Kimberly, for stopping by and commenting. Much appreciated dear friend! Wishing a very lovely evening!In His light! God bless you! :)D.

M. L. Kiser Date: 1/20/2015 1:22:00 PM Honest, true and quite well penned. An important message for all. Login to Reply Dorian Petersen Potter Date: 3/6/2015 8:34:00 PM Thank you so kindly again, M.L. Kiser, for stopping by and commenting. Much appreciated dear friend! Wishing a very lovely evening!In His light! God bless you! :)D.

Michael Hawk Moore Date: 1/20/2015 12:40:00 AM I liked it...well done Login to Reply Dorian Petersen Potter Date: 3/6/2015 8:33:00 PM Thank you so kindly again,Michael, for stopping by and commenting. Much appreciated dear friend! Wishing a very lovely evening!In His light! God bless you! :)D. "