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Nature's Goddess Through the meadows frolicking, she wears dew drops in the spring on her fair neck glistening. Feb. 21, 2017 for nette onclaud's Triad in Seven Beats Poetry contest Syllable count checked by Howmanysyllables.com

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Mark Martin

Date: 3/12/2017 4:22:00 PM

Love the mother nature imagery and the upbeat first line. Congratulations on your win Andrea! :-)

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 2/28/2017 8:18:00 AM

a very pretty and upbeat triad here, andrea - congrats on your win in nette's contest!

Agnes Krampe

Date: 2/26/2017 2:31:00 PM

Coming back with congrats.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/26/2017 11:06:00 AM

ohh, wonderful personification that brings out a such lovely imagery, andie... warm congrats on your shining award and thanks for being part of this contest..huggs

Laura Leiser

Date: 2/24/2017 10:14:00 PM

Very beautiful imagery, Andrea! GL in the contest :)

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 2/24/2017 2:26:00 AM

Seven simple beats and all the nature in it. And all of us, when we listen to the beats.

Joe Maverick

Date: 2/24/2017 1:52:00 AM

Just the right write, that will add to the spring times gathering light.' well done Andrea..)

Jennifer Walker

Date: 2/23/2017 8:32:00 AM

Beautiful flowing words that are so filled with imagery.

Lynn Marie

Date: 2/22/2017 2:14:00 PM

Beautiful Andrea. made me smile:-) My best to you in the contest. blessings, lynn

Chris Green

Date: 2/22/2017 7:16:00 AM

Very beautiful, the competition is heavy in this contest and yours really stands out to me. A lovely and enchanting poem Andrea.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 2/22/2017 6:58:00 AM

Beautiful, Andrea:)

Agnes Krampe

Date: 2/22/2017 6:55:00 AM

Oh, beautiful!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/22/2017 5:22:00 AM

- Beautiful, Andrea - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Caycay Jennings

Date: 2/22/2017 1:08:00 AM

Phew, at first I thought you had four lines and THAT I must have erred. Once I got over that I thoroughly enjoyed your take on the picture. I've just begun seeking these to read and yours is the first. It is a beauty, Andrea, even this late (early), it brought me a smile. Poetry hugs ... CayCay