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Triad In Seven Beats

Nature's Goddess Through the meadows frolicking, she wears dew drops in the spring on her fair neck glistening. Feb. 21, 2017 for nette onclaud's Triad in Seven Beats Poetry contest Syllable count checked by Howmanysyllables.com
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Martin Avatar
March 12, 2017 at 4:22 PM
Love the mother nature imagery and the upbeat first line. Congratulations on your win Andrea! :-)
Puddifoot Avatar
February 28, 2017 at 8:18 AM
a very pretty and upbeat triad here, andrea - congrats on your win in nette's contest!
Krampe Avatar
February 26, 2017 at 2:31 PM
Coming back with congrats.
Onclaud Avatar
February 26, 2017 at 11:06 AM
ohh, wonderful personification that brings out a such lovely imagery, andie... warm congrats on your shining award and thanks for being part of this contest..huggs
Leiser Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 10:14 PM
Very beautiful imagery, Andrea! GL in the contest :)
Neumann Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 2:26 AM
Seven simple beats and all the nature in it. And all of us, when we listen to the beats.
Maverick Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 1:52 AM
Just the right write, that will add to the spring times gathering light.' well done Andrea..)
Walker Avatar
February 23, 2017 at 8:32 AM
Beautiful flowing words that are so filled with imagery.
Marie Avatar
February 22, 2017 at 2:14 PM
Beautiful Andrea. made me smile:-) My best to you in the contest. blessings, lynn
Green Avatar
February 22, 2017 at 7:16 AM
Very beautiful, the competition is heavy in this contest and yours really stands out to me. A lovely and enchanting poem Andrea.
Daniel Avatar
February 22, 2017 at 6:58 AM
Beautiful, Andrea:)
Krampe Avatar
February 22, 2017 at 6:55 AM
Oh, beautiful!
Andresen Avatar
February 22, 2017 at 5:22 AM
- Beautiful, Andrea - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Godwin Avatar
February 22, 2017 at 1:08 AM
Phew, at first I thought you had four lines and THAT I must have erred. Once I got over that I thoroughly enjoyed your take on the picture. I've just begun seeking these to read and yours is the first. It is a beauty, Andrea, even this late (early), it brought me a smile. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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