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Triad In 7 Beats Opaque Hue

chartreuse leaflets sprinkle dew,
   with faint droplets...opaque hue-
                 weave me lattice to renew


TRIAD IN 7 BEATS 
Nette Onclaud
February 21, 2017

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Mark Martin

March 12, 2017 at 4:25 PM

Unusual use of the word chartreuse - a naturally green liquor. Great poem and congratulations Laura! :-)

Andrea Dietrich

February 26, 2017 at 6:45 PM

SO PRETTY, Laura Loo!!! BIG congrats on your win.

Jan Allison

February 26, 2017 at 4:01 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Luloo:-) hugs Jan xx

Agnes Krampe

February 26, 2017 at 2:31 PM

Coming back with congrats, luloo.

Nette Onclaud

February 26, 2017 at 10:28 AM

bravo, dear lou... i could picture this heady scene.. great win for you and thanks for supporting my contest..huggs

Kim Rodrigues

February 21, 2017 at 8:35 PM

Nice imagery, Luloo!

Peter Dome

February 21, 2017 at 3:37 PM

stunningly beautiful, and so poetic. well done. Pete.

Agnes Krampe

February 21, 2017 at 2:16 PM

Beautiful! I love seeing everybody's entries - so many different ways at looking the same thing. Good luck in the contest, luloo.

Jan Allison

February 21, 2017 at 1:45 PM

Very beautiful LuLoo good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Chris Green

February 21, 2017 at 1:17 PM

Laura, this was beautiful, I mean truly beautiful. I have read a few for this contest and all I can say is, I'm glad I'm not judging it. This looks like a winner to me.

Triad In 7 Beats Opaque Hue

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