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Triad In 7 Beats Opaque Hue

chartreuse leaflets sprinkle dew, with faint droplets...opaque hue- weave me lattice to renew TRIAD IN 7 BEATS Nette Onclaud February 21, 2017

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Mark Martin

Date: 3/12/2017 4:25:00 PM

Unusual use of the word chartreuse - a naturally green liquor. Great poem and congratulations Laura! :-)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/26/2017 6:45:00 PM

SO PRETTY, Laura Loo!!! BIG congrats on your win.

Jan Allison

Date: 2/26/2017 4:01:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Luloo:-) hugs Jan xx

Agnes Krampe

Date: 2/26/2017 2:31:00 PM

Coming back with congrats, luloo.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/26/2017 10:28:00 AM

bravo, dear lou... i could picture this heady scene.. great win for you and thanks for supporting my contest..huggs

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/21/2017 8:35:00 PM

Nice imagery, Luloo!

Peter Dome

Date: 2/21/2017 3:37:00 PM

stunningly beautiful, and so poetic. well done. Pete.

Agnes Krampe

Date: 2/21/2017 2:16:00 PM

Beautiful! I love seeing everybody's entries - so many different ways at looking the same thing. Good luck in the contest, luloo.

Jan Allison

Date: 2/21/2017 1:45:00 PM

Very beautiful LuLoo good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Chris Green

Date: 2/21/2017 1:17:00 PM

Laura, this was beautiful, I mean truly beautiful. I have read a few for this contest and all I can say is, I'm glad I'm not judging it. This looks like a winner to me.