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Triad In 7 Beats Contest

HOURGLASS FIGURE

a shower curtain of dew
widow spider bids adieu
hazard for the chosen few

2/21/2017
Nette Onclaud’s TRIAD IN 7 BEATS CONTEST

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Anne-Lise Andresen

February 22, 2017 at 11:32 AM

- One popular contest ... lovely written, Kim - Good luck! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues

February 22, 2017 at 12:22 PM

Thanks so much! Was fun! I saw the necklace, but thought 'what else do I see?' :) Blessings!

Chris Green

February 22, 2017 at 7:34 AM

Nice one Kim. I love that last line. I have walked into spider webs so many times and they can definitely be a hazard.

Kim Rodrigues

February 22, 2017 at 8:29 AM

Thank you, Chris!

Joanna Daniel

February 22, 2017 at 6:54 AM

Nice lines, Kim:)

Kim Rodrigues

February 22, 2017 at 8:29 AM

Thank you, Jo!

Jan Allison

February 22, 2017 at 4:04 AM

Very clever poem Kim - I too am not a fan of spiders but their webs are so beautiful ... but deadly for some!:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues

February 22, 2017 at 5:27 AM

Thank you, Jan!

Joseph May

February 21, 2017 at 10:04 PM

I like this one Kim..Nicely done

Kim Rodrigues

February 21, 2017 at 10:05 PM

Thanks, Joseph!

Agnes Krampe

February 21, 2017 at 9:06 PM

Interesting take on the prompt. (I hate spiders!) I love seeing what everybody does with it. Good luck in the contest.

Kim Rodrigues

February 21, 2017 at 9:31 PM

Thank you, Agnes!

Triad In 7 Beats Contest

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