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Triad In 7 Beats Contest

HOURGLASS FIGURE a shower curtain of dew widow spider bids adieu hazard for the chosen few 2/21/2017 Nette Onclaud’s TRIAD IN 7 BEATS CONTEST

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/22/2017 11:32:00 AM

- One popular contest ... lovely written, Kim - Good luck! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/22/2017 12:22:00 PM

Thanks so much! Was fun! I saw the necklace, but thought 'what else do I see?' :) Blessings!

Chris Green

Date: 2/22/2017 7:34:00 AM

Nice one Kim. I love that last line. I have walked into spider webs so many times and they can definitely be a hazard.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/22/2017 8:29:00 AM

Thank you, Chris!

Joanna Daniel

Date: 2/22/2017 6:54:00 AM

Nice lines, Kim:)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/22/2017 8:29:00 AM

Thank you, Jo!

Jan Allison

Date: 2/22/2017 4:04:00 AM

Very clever poem Kim - I too am not a fan of spiders but their webs are so beautiful ... but deadly for some!:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/22/2017 5:27:00 AM

Thank you, Jan!

Joseph May

Date: 2/21/2017 10:04:00 PM

I like this one Kim..Nicely done

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/21/2017 10:05:00 PM

Thanks, Joseph!

Agnes Krampe

Date: 2/21/2017 9:06:00 PM

Interesting take on the prompt. (I hate spiders!) I love seeing what everybody does with it. Good luck in the contest.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/21/2017 9:31:00 PM

Thank you, Agnes!