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Triad In 7 Beats

'The Spider Queen' Eighty-eight pearls in the green Nature's web the spider queen Don’t disturb she’ll make a scene. 02.22.2017 TRIAD IN 7 BEATS...Contest Sponsored by...nette onclaud

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Mark Martin

Date: 3/12/2017 3:34:00 PM

Did you really count the drops in the picture? Anyway, great poem and congratulations! :-)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/26/2017 7:06:00 PM

this is a fun one to read. Loved the bit of whimsy in it. Congrats on the winner list.

Jan Allison

Date: 2/26/2017 4:19:00 PM

I wouldn't want to meet her when she got angry - great imagery John:-) congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Agnes Krampe

Date: 2/26/2017 2:36:00 PM

Coming back with congrats.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/26/2017 11:42:00 AM

that sense of anticipation and word choice make this verse a sure winner, WW... a round of congrats and thanks for being part of this challenge.. huggs

Joanna Daniel

Date: 2/22/2017 7:19:00 AM

Lovely entry, WW:)

Agnes Krampe

Date: 2/22/2017 6:57:00 AM

I don't want to see the scene the spider queen makes. Shudder. Good luck in the contest.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/22/2017 5:29:00 AM

- Many beautiful poem to this contest .... - I enjoy this beauty, W.W. - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)