Winged Warrior Poet Verse

Triad In 7 Beats

'The Spider Queen'


Eighty-eight pearls in the green
Nature's web the spider queen
Don’t disturb she’ll make a scene.




02.22.2017
TRIAD IN 7 BEATS...Contest
Sponsored by...nette onclaud

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Mark Martin March 12, 2017 at 3:34 PM Did you really count the drops in the picture? Anyway, great poem and congratulations! :-)

Andrea Dietrich February 26, 2017 at 7:06 PM this is a fun one to read. Loved the bit of whimsy in it. Congrats on the winner list.

Jan Allison February 26, 2017 at 4:19 PM I wouldn't want to meet her when she got angry - great imagery John:-) congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Agnes Krampe February 26, 2017 at 2:36 PM Coming back with congrats.

Nette Onclaud February 26, 2017 at 11:42 AM that sense of anticipation and word choice make this verse a sure winner, WW... a round of congrats and thanks for being part of this challenge.. huggs

Joanna Daniel February 22, 2017 at 7:19 AM Lovely entry, WW:)

Agnes Krampe February 22, 2017 at 6:57 AM I don't want to see the scene the spider queen makes. Shudder. Good luck in the contest.

Anne-Lise Andresen February 22, 2017 at 5:29 AM - Many beautiful poem to this contest .... - I enjoy this beauty, W.W. - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)