Lyva Marty Poet Verse

Triad In 7 Beats

Mists Of His Ghost



When mists of evening shimmer

tears like raindrops   seem to blur;

His ghost trails---I grow dimmer.


Triad In 7 Beats Contest / Feb 22, 2017
Sponsor: nette onclaud

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Mark Martin March 12, 2017 at 3:23 PM Moving... Congratulations on your win Lyva! :-)

Andrea Dietrich February 26, 2017 at 7:09 PM this one is very intriguing to me!! Congrats for your win. Glad I saw this.

Jan Allison February 26, 2017 at 4:22 PM very touching lines Lyva congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Agnes Krampe February 26, 2017 at 2:37 PM Congrats, Lyva.

Nette Onclaud February 26, 2017 at 11:56 AM ohh, a poignant verse that stirs the senses, lyva... fine congrats on your win and thanks for joining..huggs

Chris Green February 21, 2017 at 3:15 PM This is beautiful Lyva. Such a heart touching piece.