Triad In 7 Beats

Teardrops on spider webs strung
Clearly mark cries of the young -
Love's bitter taste on the tongue
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Rodrigues Avatar
February 21, 2017 at 8:33 PM
Like this, Larry!
Bradfield Avatar
February 21, 2017 at 10:14 PM
I'm glad, Kim!..Thanks for saying so..Larry
Green Avatar
February 21, 2017 at 2:22 PM
I like your take on this. Really nicely done, you have created beauty from sadness.
Bradfield Avatar
February 21, 2017 at 10:13 PM
Thank you, Chris!
Allison Avatar
February 21, 2017 at 2:10 PM
beautiful but sad Larry - good luck:-) hugs Jan xx
Bradfield Avatar
February 21, 2017 at 10:12 PM
Thank you, Jan. Always appreciated!
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